Песня для семьи (song for my family) Its very nice piece of work.
As whole song is a metal, words are surprisingly understandable and clear.
Won't say anything more. Its good.
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Novaya Rana So, song is not bad overall. But personally I don't like this style. It's kind of a mix of village's songs (polkas for ex.) and metal.
Some mistakes were found but as you not native speaker: who cares? (If you want:
1. Sometimes gender changes in song (if I don't get sense right it's not fault):
"Пока в погоне за ветром, он СБИЛ меня прямо с ног" - words of a man;
"Ты хотела меня ну, унижать - получилось, но я по крайне живА", "вот моя новая рана - не что стою я одна" - women's words.
If I not mistaken the main hero is a man. So sometimes its sounds weird.
2. I think it's no use to put slang words like: "щас", "сассный", "насрать"; better will be normal equivalents: "сейчас", "красивый (idk)".
Yup.)
ADR3-N responds:
Oh, thanks a ton for taking the time to go through grammar!
For он I was referring to кулак hitting me in the face
The hero is, well, me, female. So I can see how it would be confusing for the average Russian speaker who probably doesn't assume a woman is singing about another woman -- and especially not with my voice, or being married to a woman because that's unthinkable XD
As for сассный, I literally meant the sissy, gay, ridiculous connotation, because I'm referencing being ridiculed for looking gay. The rest I probably could have written differently but my ability to rhyme in Russian is significantly less than that of English given it's my second language LOL
If this is the only issue with my writing I'm actually pretty happy with it. Thanks again!
You love and then its gone As a Belarusian I can confirm that some words are barely understandable and accent gives interesting feeling (потеряна - "поярена?"). But, it's not disadvantage, opposite - it's creates unique charm to song. And yup, sounds like anime opening.
ADR3-N responds:
Aww, thanks so much for checking out my work! I have a few other Russian pieces I've done, namely Novaya Rana and Песня для семьи here on NG. On my YouTube there's Dream Fighter, Танцую с незнакомцем, and Хочу Чтоб ты знала due to rights issues. I'd be really interested to know what you thought of those if you enjoyed this style of music, since I'm not a native Russian speaker!
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